Voices
In Chapter 6 of A Tale of Two Cities, we are finally introduced to Doctor Manette, the father of Lucy. At this point of time in the book, the reader is told that Lucies father had been hidden for about 18 years and we find out that he has been hiding in the DeFarge's wine shop. Dickens does a great job portraying Doctor Manette's character as being very dreadful and hopeless by using powerful language. The description of Doctor Manette's character is shown in its own paragraph, strictly talking about his voice. Here is the paragraph describing the voice of the shoemaker:
This passage is very powerful because it describes the character by just mentioning the tone of his voice. This description is also placed in its own paragraph which emphasizes its importance. It is very unusual to find this lengthy of a paragraph strictly describing a characters voice and Dickens does a great job grabbing both the readers attention and sympathy by uniquely describing Doctor Manettes voice. Dickens uses words such as: dreadful, faintness, sunken, poor, weak, and hopeless to depict the emotions of this character.
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I agree with Jack, Dickens does a really good job at describing Dr. Manette in a very subtile way. You really can tell he is hopeless just from the sound of this voice and you know he isn’t all there mentally by his responses to both Defarge and Mr. Lorry. It’s a great example of show don’t tell and I think you feel more empathy for Dr. Manette through this passage.
ReplyDeleteGood passage choice, Jack, and I like your comments about Dickens setting off this description as its own paragraph.
ReplyDeleteHere's a suggestion: when you reflect on Dickens' description in the second half of your blog post refer back to the specifics in the passage that create this "powerful" (your words) description.